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The stranger
chapter one




the town overlooked the graveyard, the dark foggy graveyard surrounded the city....
the stranger came down the road and saw the graveyard its wonderfull leave-less trees that looked as if you could pull one of the branches off and have it be a weapon.
the stranger grinned an evil grin and thought "breeze wood"
"oh shi-" he was suddenly stopped when the police had found him in the alley with that bloodied knife in his hand,
he ran past all the houses as fast as possible then suddenly at the curve slammed in to a telephone pole.
now he was in jail about to get a death sentence for killing that bitch she deserved it he thought, then the lights went out.
everyone was screaming at the gaurds, turns out the whole city's power was out. here we were in the dark nothing to do
but comfort ourselves, then someone screamed not at the gaurds but a scream of pain, frantically I tried to get out, the gaurds let all the cells loose from the control center
and i ran for my life hearing screams and the ripping of flesh i wish i had known what had been going on,and sometimes i wish i didn't.

chapter 2
the hidden
As I ran out of that accursed place I could smell something foul, i looked everywhere to see it but all i saw was water and sand. I hate prison islands i thought. luckily i found a small boat as i left everyone was throwing rocks at me.
as i came ashore at the town i saw the graveyard darker than usual it gave me an eerie feeling. just to feel safe i pulled my knife out, i went to the hick house it was deserted because the people there were murdered by some rabid german shepherds. it got cold fast in that house and every time i moved the floor creaked loudly, i decided to get some food i went outside and saw a man that apeared to be drunk swaying as so. i came out of one of the houses with some canned ravioli
and the man was still this time his hood was low he faced me, he suddenly jumped at me and made a hissing sound
"crap" he pinned me down and and tried biting a my throat, he must be a maniac i grabbed my knife a slit his throat he gagged and thew up, then he tried attacking me with more force this time. i stuck the knife in his eye as it popped
he screeched and fell breathing heavily in a pool of blood, i crushed his head with my boots and spat at his body.
i went back to the house and i was scared to death so i kept my knife out and made sure there was no one here and slept...




Chapter 3
The Freindship
When I woke up there was a man about an inch or so taller than him he had a long beard and was a bit fat but as I looked closer I figured it was all muscle. the girl had what comics called the "perfect curve" i was stunned at how sexy she was. it had somewhow still been dark but it was the next day and it was 3:00 p.m. weird I thought. "come on we have to get out of here before they get back" the man said "what do you mean they?" "just get out with us before you get ripped to peices" I ran out not in a hurry but just not to make them think i was a sissy. when i got out there was figures moving in the fog around the cemetary i heard a gunshot and the man said "welcome to breezewood you bastard!" we found a house up the block they said it was farther away from the "things". "okay who are you guys" "well this is my daughter Jenna and my name is Rob, how bout you" "well, my name is John i was sent to a prison and i luckily escaped" "oh and Jenna is a bit shy" then he whispered "her mom died" "honey how bout you say hi to this nice young man" "Daaaaaaaad" "its ok sweetie" we had to go out because there was no food there, and as i got out one of them leaped at me and almost bit me "God help me ahhhhhhhh!" then he suddenly stopped and closed his eyes and Robs hand were messy with blood, in his right hand he had a butcher knife the thing had a huge incision in his head and was gushing blood in a marvelous spray. i looked away disgusted and we went to different house Jenna was shaking like crazy. and there Rob stood awake while we slept... I awoke in the middle of the night hearing a noise i got up and saw a dark figure stand over Rob he kicked him, Rob look up and the
thing hissed at him a lunged forward
Rob tried to dodge it but he couldnt and his neck got torn open.
jenna screamed then angrily withought a weapon i went to it and grabed its jaws and ripped its head in half, "oh god h-how did y-you do t-that".
I ran i was so scared of myself i ran to the kitchen and stood there thinking...

chapter 4
The beginning of...
when i finnaly got up i looked outside and it ticked me off that there was no sunlight then a heared a far away gunshot and screaming, it was a woman screaming. i wanted to see if i could still do the stuff i did last night but i think it was just anger .
i asked jenna to come outside and help me find a new house we found a nice house about a mile away.
it was great because it had alot of crawlspaces and airvents everywhere.
so i went outside and told jenna to hide somewhere in the house,
i went outside to settle something.
i walked down the street all cracked and bruised and found the house where it all started... the hick house.
it was as if it were in a horror movie the way the street met at the house as i walked forward i heard some snarling at me it jumped and attacked
it bit me on the hand and then it suddenly got my neck i crushed it head with my hands and ran screaming.
i felt weird i felt hungry and thirsty and my throat was itching my teeth were tingling, but i walked on to the hick house...

...The End
I knew there was something there from the start because thats what was in my dreams like once i was walking down the street and this tall dark man kept looking out the window. when i was at the door i tried to turn the knob but it wouldn't move, so i kicked it twice and i broke in half revealing some termites. when i got in the house two of them started coming torward me i sliced ones cheek open with my new...claws? i suddenly felt the urge to bite something so i jumped and bit the other ones face they both were now on the floor twitching. i walked upstairs and checked all but the masters bedroom, when i went in there was also nothing so i left, but when i got out this tall figure jump on me and slashed me in the stomach i screeched i tried to slash his face but he grabbed my hand and twisted it i kicked but he dodged it and slashed me again i got angry and punched him in the face then he got furious grabbed my head and kept slicing me in the chest, then i used my last bit of strength and grabbed his hand and made him stab his eye he yelled and i said "you son of a bitch, go to where you came from" and grabbed his head and twisted his neck. i went on limping back over to where jenna was but i saw the hick house had a blue light circle it really fast then it went into the sky which i noticed the sun coming up. i ran to the house now the sun kept burning my flesh, i got there finnaly and told jenna to stay here and your safe. then there was rumbling and jeeps were outside army jeeps they came in the saw me and said "open your mouth'' i knew there trick and i knew it was the end so i attacked for hope to live i bit his neck and ran upstairs and locked my self in i stood there and closed my eyes then. they came in i heard gunshots then everything went black...


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don885 hey 2 Mar 16 2008, 7:46 PM EDT by don885
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you guys should READ i am legend the movie sucks because they changed the whole storyline like how he dies and the fact that the book was about vampires the movies about zombies which pisses me off alot
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don885 o yeah 0 Feb 15 2008, 6:00 PM EST by don885
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there vampires so they do get burned by the sun duh
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don885 reply 0 Feb 15 2008, 6:00 PM EST by don885
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i recently read i am legend salems lot and 30 days of night which i tried as hard as possible not to make it too much like it but those were the insparations

p.s. im gonna make more that are way different
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